Wednesday, May 21, 2008

beautiful victory


my muse is screaming. she floods my brain with blood and tears. insanity is bliss.

"you do not appreciate me," said she.

"shut up," said me. "you're a figment of my imagination."

she bares her fangs and consumes me. i taste the nicotine on her lips. her nails dig deep into my shivering skin, feeding my veins with her poison. i am paralyzed. the world spins out of its axis. my soul erupts.

"i am an evil heartbreaker," i hear her whisper. but i am not sure.

she leaves me to rot, dancing under a torrent of white rose petals. i die.

hell hath no fury like an imaginary lover scorned.

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

tsktsk..

poetic entry.. parang inubos ni muse ang iyong lakas..hmmm.

Anonymous said...

your muse sounds like a sadistic mistress. =D

nice writing, jai!

jaiskizzy said...

monday: inubos talaga. pero ok na ulit. ready to fight ulit. wehe

ace: thanks. all i had was "my muse is screaming" and "hell hat no fury...". i just filled in the gap with the best shit i could think of.

Patty said...

Wow, very... evil. Haha.

jaiskizzy said...

she is. just the way i like her.

Marchiesal Bustamante said...

http://laboratoryo.invisionplus.net/index.php

pre, klik away...

kitakits...

dramaiqueen said...

best shit it is

Unknown said...

i like! nyahahaha! ano ba yan, galing mo talaga magsulat kuya. hahaha! :)

jaiskizzy said...

red: thanks. it has a few different meanings but to me it is simply about masturbation.

maria: hindi naman...pero salamat ng marami.

Paoper said...

Your imaginary lover is Tessa Prieto-Valdez?

jaiskizzy said...

pao: ay hinde.

Anonymous said...

Tessa Prieto-Valdez? LOL

jaiskizzy said...

sm: ewan dyan. nang-aasar pa. uno cover girl yun e. tsk tsk.